Coincided Tides

Vzzzp

Lemony in pepper and painted up

You… yes you

Struck out and lined, lying blinded

Sold and coincided

Feel in and felt out, rude remarkable

Groped in clout

I desire that, and you fancy yourself some

It’s quite humbling to dine with the intent

Tidal lament

Gross to abhor

Stretched and supported, you chide

I laugh, because pride

Chokes up

Shadowed in the ensemble

Mm, the taste; it goes nicely

Pricey, but with the pain comes my pleasure

Sick, sapped-out-strung and better

I’m inclined to coincide with your taste

Truths be told, and lies be heard

Take my fall, and I’ll take yours

Thanks, come around again, won’t you please?

Pleasure, cemented

Presented problematic confusion

Solvent and glued in.

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Word-smart poem, and they blended in with its cadence and rhythm. A good tempo without being sing-songy. Most enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your poem with us. Cheers.

[ObscurityNone]

Thanks, Fred.

[Red Brick Keshner]

You are most welcome. See you 'round the site or better yet on some of our other poems!