Ale Meant

Ale Meant

A Poem by ObscurityNone
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Bright shiny shindig

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Slamming on the wheel

You know what happens

It’s come to not care         

Now listen to me

Crease the bleed

Lend it a glare, then chastise with care

Go ahead now, cry me a liver

Your greatest deed

Missed and creed

Listed with need

Four nights an ale

Inhale the last

You brought all that chance

Take it back with you

It’s easy to forget you

So don’t try and last in this

It is you who’ll regress

Bliss, I keep alone

Whole with it blown

Out of proportion

Most of the distortion

Affects the head

Keep it lead

Lead and leading, misconceiving

I have swept

Enough of the tears of your sweat

Start to cry, my dear

I won’t, nope; never shall I shed your fear

© 2013 ObscurityNone


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ObscurityNone

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I like it... raw angst.. it's really emotional even if you stay behind a wall of cascading thought. "it's easy to forget you so don't try and last in this" was particularly painful to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, though I do mean you no harm, Circe. Heh.
Circe

11 Years Ago

haha good, noted :)

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Added on December 9, 2012
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