We All

We All

A Poem by ObscurityNone
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Individual organizational infrastructural anarchistic integrity

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Prevail, you must

My master, I demand

Live just

Live free

This is our land

Shed some blood, don’t drain

Cry a tear when the all is near

Until that time

Fight you must

Keep the breath of life, I hear of

Keep it deep in your soul’s spirit

Let nothing contain it

Let no man tame it

Rage, maybe drive you

Peace, pride you

I will not die to

Leave the all in tatters

All

We are as one as it gets

I guarantee you this

Will you though?

Will one such as yourself

Step down, rise, kneel, bow, dream, act, live, or maybe slip?

Keep it high, that chin

Keep the hopes even higher

The will, you will, I will

Greater yet

We will

All

Prevail.

© 2012 ObscurityNone


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this is definitely awesome stuff.... "Shed some blood, don't drain", that is one perfect line... I love reading encouraging words like these.. this is the human spirit... the individual spirit and in prevailing we become stronger for each other.. "we are as one as it gets"... another one that sings to my heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Glad I can do it for ya, Circe.



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this is really amazing, you write with intelligence and integrity. there's a lot of emotion in it... it sounds like a motivational speech of sorts. i don't know, it's inspiring. excellent work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
this is definitely awesome stuff.... "Shed some blood, don't drain", that is one perfect line... I love reading encouraging words like these.. this is the human spirit... the individual spirit and in prevailing we become stronger for each other.. "we are as one as it gets"... another one that sings to my heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Glad I can do it for ya, Circe.
I really like this, very powerful and strong emotion is definitely evident nice job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I hoped to get that sort of feeling.
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

Well you succeeded nice job

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