Still Got It You

Still Got It You

A Poem by ObscurityNone
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I do

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Grave errors laid back

Think it out, try the systematic

Approaches

Erode this, take it, and give it freely

Hey, Baby…

Will we?

No

Can I…no

I cannot, you cannot, she feels it, and it’s out

Long dropped off at that point

Where there is no return

No soothe

Baby, burn

Ache at the take

On it all

Situation makes it, understandable

Give a hand, a simple gesture

Yeahh, I met & regret her

Only the fool in me says such things

The one filled with what should not be

Simply put, mistaking

Engraving, the writing on that wall

One put up in my mind, on my back, and angled right

Tell me this, eh?

 

Do you remember me?

© 2012 ObscurityNone


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I like reading these inner thoughts.. your words are frankly quite charming.. you give a few clues and take the reader through your mind.. it might be nothingness to you but it reads as something cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

12 Years Ago

Heh, thank you Circe. You do me honor.

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Added on November 7, 2012
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ObscurityNone
ObscurityNone

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