Facade

Facade

A Poem by ObscurityNone
"

Harming oneself.

"

Singe

Your heart

Break the bone

Force a grin you’re

Lone

© 2012 ObscurityNone


Author's Note

ObscurityNone
I did not spend very long on this, I just typed for a few sec and only stopped to change "smile" to "grin" so that it would fit the syllabic requirements. So in other words, I know it's short and simple =p Tis a Lanturne, after all.

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I felt the anguish. It made sense, and you didn't over complicate it with words. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

12 Years Ago

Thank you.
Though I am not familiar with lanturnes, this was excellent! Very well done, and emotional. I felt the despair between the letters. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.
frivolous treasures

12 Years Ago

Your most welcome :)

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Added on October 8, 2012
Last Updated on October 8, 2012
Tags: Fake, Facade, Alone, Self Harm

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ObscurityNone

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