In Place of an Eye

I had a lot of fun with this first attempt at an Etheree.

As

The men

Approach him,

With swords in hand,

The hooded figure,

Emits flames from his staff,

Cripple the weak, execute,

No one stands much a chance, against

This man, with magic at his command,

He then brought forth a dark curse of lament

As they are struck with lies, suicide ends,

Their lives, the hooded man turns his gaze

 Towards the woman, all dressed in

Deep dark red, with eyes of blue,

He cracked a smile, out came

A taunting chuckle,

In that instant

An arrow

Pierced his

Eye

Author's Note

Review please.

Reviews

[Circe]

nice work with the form and fantasy imagery.. the arrow piercing eye was a funny bit, is that intentional?

[ObscurityNone]

I intended for it to be more dramatic, and ironic, which can definitely be interpreted as humor at times, but thank you. =)

[Circe]

yeah I like that sudden change of pace for the conclusion :)