Set Stone

This is just essentially what I said during a conversation except what I did is smash it together and re-word it to make no sense.

As sure as set stone

Struggle as I may

Forever there it lays

An inseparable alteration

With hope lying on the outside

Should I dwell elsewhere?

She alone is able to fulfill

However might the means be flawed

Is it in itself unsalvageable? 

Author's Note

Honest opinions, please. =o