Of cold and men

What truly makes a man?

The primeval instinct

Inspired by Y chromosomes most likely

Drives men to idiocy 

It is manly to not feel cold

to experience the ice pricking him

Wether it be his mind or physique

The man does not fear bitterness

Man revels in gelid

It defines him, the danger.

The rush of cool, purifying his essence

For pain, hurt and stupidity

are one and the same

All which are necessary for a man

All which when combined make him numb

Pain for the mind

Hurt for the flesh

And stupidity to fulfill the needs of a Y

When Boy turns to man 

He must feel the chill, bathe in the Ice 

Know it's freezing touch inside out

Reviews

[Constance-Outspoken]

Well, as a woman, I can of course appreciate this piece. :)
First of all, a correction in grammar, since I'm a big bad Grammar Nazi. The last line, it's should be its. You only use the apostrophe in that word if you are forming the contraction "it is".
Lastly, but not leastly, this is excellent, honest, yet witty and humorous work. Nicely penned.