'Oh get a grip'

Winter love? Don't let it slip away.

'Oh get a grip'

Thats life,

try to maintain sanity, feet firmly planted.

Rooted to the spot, tangled into the earth.

clutching defiantly to the same spot 

you know where your at

Winter dawns 

Frosty, frigid, freezing

An increasingly difficult affair to stay still

Hard to stay in one place, with one person

Feel the bitter cold, penetrating the soul, 

Lost your grip, it's life. 

Pushed onto the ice, try to skate, 

do you fall or glide? 

When you plummet experience the stabbing pain

Does it bring clarity? 

At the end of the year, when all is ending. 

Bring you back to earth

Smash the ice and find soil beneath. 

Entrench yourself once more,

Dig deeper, learn the lesson.

Bud for spring,

It's all happened before, does it have to again.

Reviews

[smiley:)]

Hey obscure meaning,
Striking, thrilling, and true! I like your view on life, you write with true acument.

~Smiley :)

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a outstanding poem. I like the complete poem. Your ending is true. Description and your story was very good. A lot of good questions was asked in the poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dana Kathryn]

I Love this poem,It is very well written and very down to earth!I really enjoyed this one,thanks


Dana-