'Next Please'

'Next Please'

A Poem by Obscure Meaning
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User, taker, manipulator.

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They wait and they long 
Metaphorically queuing

Wonder what it would be like
Wishing to take over from the last
curiosity definitely killed this cat 
anticipation of what is to come
promises, as empty as his soul
Easily washed away like the kiss 
Which haunts her 

The ghost of a promise 
playing about her lips
Too easily persuaded 
Provided little challenge
The amusement of the case ruined
The reason for him
only primeval instinct 

Take what you can
When you can
Because you can
Perhaps his motto

© 2010 Obscure Meaning


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Such an intersting and lovely read. Reall great work - i love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your words are amazing. So many statements that are very good. The ghost of a promise. That is very good. You have talent to convey your message. Poem is outstanding. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Obscure Meaning
Obscure Meaning

Winchester, Hants, United Kingdom



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Unfortunately as a younger child it is the general opinion of my friends I have a damaged a center of sensation, intellectual and nervous ability inside myself. Hopefully my writings have all the ob.. more..

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