Squashed!

Was in half a goofy mood...so here's a half goofy write from me! hehe

 

Poised and confident I start the day

Come rain or storm or whatever may

 

I walk ahead with a determined mind

I’ll accomplish deeds of any kind

 

I’ll carry burdens ten times my weight

For it is ‘I’ who’ll determine my fate

 

In harmony with my brethren I will work

Ready to fight danger which may lurk

 

I am not cattle but follow I will

The teachings I’ve learned, I will fulfill

 

Together we are stronger, together we are one

With beliefs like this, battles have been won

 

Till a day came when I decided to rebel

Is that ‘cause of puberty? I wish I’d have lived to tell

 

So now my friends please listen to me

Together we’re stronger, together we’re free

 

Don’t be a fool like me and get lost

‘cause when I left you brothers, is when I got squashed!

 

Love,

Ant 90210 (from Antheaven)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

ohhh weee,very nice,i start my day so fresh was i ,confidant so come what may,carry burdens lots more than my weight,for i determine my fate,together with my brethren i will work ,so many battles so have been won,till you decided to rebel and its cause of puberty i will tell,off course together with friends you are strong and you will never lose the way,nice very witty writing and so enjoyable as all your works really...

[Emily B]

Oh, too cute!!!! It took me a minute--ant heaven. Thanks for the grin.

[Prudence Desideria]

I love you! :) Just, you know, thought you should know, hhaha :)
Nah but seriously, how can you get it so happy and inspiring and then pull that twist? And it;s still freaking happy and inspiring in a sense, and it makes me all bubbly and giddy... for some odd reason. Point is, I love these goofy writes
xo xo

[Samuel Dickens]

The poor ant--it should have followed its instincts and not been so independent. Your "goofy mood" as you call it has produced a bittersweet, entertaining little tale, dear O!