You Always Tasted Like Nicotine.

I am jack's act of stupidity.

I dont know why im writting this. You wont even bother to read it. You never bothered to listen.

God, you've made me so bitter. I hate it.

I can't be happy without you interrupting my thoughts and killing it.

I can't smile without you making me cry.

I can't let you go without the temptation to call you or run into your arms.

I am  jacks infinate sorrow.

All my sanity was wasted on you.

Sacrifices were never appreciated.

Mom thinks im crazy.

She's probably right.

Every bit of my mind gets shrviled up, blended in a whirlpool of barbaric emotional toture, and spat in the eye of every happy minded individual.

It makes me sick. It makes my stomach pound with rocks hitting each side.

*thud, thud, thomp*

It makes me want to run so fast until my muscules burn and my veins pump battery acid. I wish it would eat me alive.

My lips are chapped without you're taste on them.

I miss that nicotine addiction.

I could taste it in your kiss.

I am jacks's infectious disease.

One more dose of me, one more dose of you.

Is there no warning label on your bottle?

To caution the unwise and blind of the heartache that awaits them?

Are there no doctors, or surgeons to remove your overdose from my system?

*tick, tock ,tick, tock*

The clock struck 12 with a shake that stirred my soul.

Reality slapped me in the face and with a bruise i left you alone.

I am jack's novicane.

Reviews

[siri]

i guess i shouldnt have called you intriguing if i couldnt live up to the words i wrote luckily i still find you that way the more i read keeps building layers of interest this poem is brilliant you have a delicious unique style that is dark the emotions you describe create imagery. imagine that an image of a feeling good job thanks for sharing!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

i like this , there are very very many good and strong lines. Your words are so descriptive it makes it easy for the reader to feel the emotions that you write.. i also like the interjection of 'I am Jack's..ect.'
A very interesting read very well written. Good title .
Chloe

[bob, small b. aka invs]

there are a lot of good lines in this poem. "all my sanity was wasted on you" etc. very expressive and there's no doubt about what you're saying. i also really liked the title. it's a story waiting to happen. which you then delivered. i think the quality of writing might be a little uneven, going from brilliant to mundane "mom thinks i'm crazy". but as a whole, i really thought it was quite well done. keep writing.