Please Set Me Free....

 Eternal Hell, Forever today,

Let's see if someone knows the pain,

Let's see if someone knows the hurt, knows the sorrow, and knows the emotions,

 

Please set me free,

to soar above the clouds,

The fighting the pain, the suffering,

 

Let's see if someone knoes how to be set free.

When I go, I hope I go peacefully,

And forget the years and hardships,

 

Please, just set me free.

Be my angel, and please set me free.

Forever in a day I live in hell.

 

Reviews

[BenightedWhispers]

I liked it. I can relate well. One spelling error but other than that great job.

Knoes should be knows

[Dalaina Renee]

One spelling error but well expressed. You have a real gift in wrighting, keep working at it!

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece ... lots of emotion put into this ..... overall nice job on this one!!!

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Aww Zachie whats wrong??? and I know what ya mean!!!