My Fortress

A random Poem

Without you it's so hard to survive,

To live on in this world means nothing.

Your heart is my fortress,

Your arms are love.

 

I need you by my side,

So safe and secure

Your touch makes my heart fly,

Let's see how long it lasts

 

You will always be my fortress

My tears will never be shed,

The good times and the bad,

We've gotton through together,

Everytime we kiss I reach for the stars,

 

You are my immortal,

My fortress

 

Reviews

[unspokenguilt]

Sweet...i loved it! great emotion, the feeling is there, and GREAT write!

[Silver_Moon]

I just wish I will find my "immortal", my "fortress". Honestly, nowadays, it is hard to find one like this character of yours.. I just wish I won't always end up with the wrong person. :D

Nice write and sweet! :)

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

OH la la Zachie... whos it about... Iove it.... Very powerful... Really good!!!!

[Amanda]

what a lovely write...the comparisons are nice and it is a loving thought to someone you obviously care very much about.

Amanda