Everything's Broken

Everything's Broken inside,

I'm unable to feel.

I'm unable to see the sunlight.

So far deep inside.

 

I live on in this world,

Not knowing what happyness is.

Not knowing what "Home" is.

Not knowing love.

 

I feel like something's missing.

Something that used to make me happy

what is this feeling?

I feel as if I'll never know.

 

Im happy on the outside,

But people never know what's wrong.

I keep up a good attitude,

But I don't know how long it will last.

Everything's broken inside.

Reviews

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Ah, this is sad, but totally relatable by most of us, at one time or another.

"Im happy on the outside,
But people never know what's wrong.
I keep up a good attitude,
But I don't know how long it will last."

Keep writing . . . and know that your talent is appreciated by so many, here.

[chloe cruz]

I loved this, since I can relate to it SO damn well! Thanks a lot for this great read! :D

[Mercury Mirrors]

=[ sucky feeling eh? That's been my whole week, dude. But in this line.

"Not knowing what happyness is."

The spelling's just a little off. It's actually:

"Not knowing what happiness is."

That's the only error. This would make a beautiful song. ^^.

MMFCL,
Malizzious.

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

I know what ya mean. I hate life so far