Love 2

Based on real life story..

I had lived in your love
I had fallen only in your love
Return

Don’t torment me
My heart hasn’t been able to forget you

I cried in your love
I laughed in your love
Love me once
Remember me once

You too shall feel my love
You too must be waiting for your lover
You will come close to me

You will saty in my company
I am living just in this hope
I am writing letters again and again to your love

Author's Note

Hope u guys enjoy reading it :)

Reviews

[Mary Bradley]

Good poem :-) ... there's a typo on the ' you will stay in my company' instead of saty !

[luvs2write]

Hey, =)
I really like this one. I especially like it where you said "Don't torment me". Love is so complicated that it's just like a roller coaster ride of emotions. I think you captured that in this poem. It seems like this poem is a little different than your others, but I really liked reading it...keep writing!!

[closed]

this feels like youre writing to someone who is faraway
almost anyway

you took a kool new perspective this time I think


-Dream

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks dream for your review :)