Valentines

Valentines day is here.... :)

You’re everything to me.

Love was where we were meant to be.

You’re so sweet.

Kissing you knocks me off my feet.

Dancing with you in the bright moon light,

When we’re together I know it feels so right.

Your kisses take my breath away

Love being with you every night and every day.

Loving you is like a dream come true.

I love you ….

 

"If this is a new start of your relationship.....

Be the person who loves 1 girl millions way,

Don't be the person who loves million girls/boys....."

Author's Note

Hope u like it... :)

Reviews

[yvo miki]

very sweet poem I liked it

[Lizardo]

A romantic piece and I love this poem.
it speaks really about love.
and I love the thought that you put at the end of the poem, thats how it should be
Great poem!

[Valentine]

Love is patient, love is kind, love is something we all are seeking. Valentine

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

This is a lovely poem! Beautifully penned and very well expressed! I liked it a lot! Thanks for sharing!☺
-Anjana

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)
I'm glad u liked it Anjana

[Nila M.]

Sweet poem. Shows the happier side of love, I like it!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

nice poem ... but there are many more important issues in life to be dealt with than love and all..... forget and forgive.... move on....

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[bubblefet]

short sweet hope we wernt the only ones who got to c it :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)
Ov3r__SkiLl3d

[Chris]

Love is the highest of highs
and meanest of lows...
It's when ya got e v e r y t h i n g
and when ya hold n o t h i n g.

The dif tween Sunrise and Midnight...
and just sometimes it's both at once.

Take time to understand what you think and to gather the words in the order you want to use them BEFORE you speak them. After you write them READ them S L O W L Y aloud AS THEY ARE WRITTEN verbatimly - NOT as you THINK them to be. Listen to the words and the rhythm of the speech pattern because YOU leave words out and your reader doesn't have to put them in for you - ya know? Sure, you're new to all this and you're flyin high but comes the time you won't be new anymore. People grow, people change... life happens... take the time now to build a good writing habit that expresses YOU through your whole life... it really is worth it man.

Chris

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)
i tried my best.....

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

This is a really great piece. I think you really captured the feel of two people in the face of real love.
I really like the little quote at the end as well. It really is something that people should take into consideration. Being with a bunch of different people doesn't make you cool. What makes you cool, is when you love one person a bunch of different ways!
Very good job! Keep up the great work!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Deepika]

A cute read on V day :) keep writing :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)