Death

To the well-organized mind, death is but the next great adventure...

I slowly die inside,

For all the times I’ve cried….

I’ve cried for you,

You look at me,

With your beautiful eyes.

You look right through me,

Like I was never alive….

I am visible,

I always will be to you…,

For some reason I knew,

I would always be,

Like this to you..

I wish you were missing me,

Like I was missing you..,

But no matter what I do,

I am always dead to you..

Our dead are never dead to us,

until we have forgotten them.
Dead is like a CO2,

which every one inhale every day...

but exhaling deadness  

 EVERY DAY

Author's Note

Hope u enjoy reading it.... :)

Reviews

[luvs2write]

Ummmm can I just say "WOW"?? =D This has to be one of my favorites of yours. It's so powerful, and I completely relate to being looked through instead of looked at. "But no matter what I do, I am always dead to you." That line had so much desperation in it...I really like this poem. =)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thank you i am glad u liked it :)

[Lizardo]

Holy cow, this poem is unique and awesome!!!
But sad at the same time...
Great poem!

[Deepika]

"I’ve cried for you,
You look at me,
With your beautiful eyes"

"I always will be to you"
--I liked these lines..
Even when the writer has tormented over someone, he still adores that 'someone' and assures to be by her side.

[Nyu]

A smart conclusion, I enjoyed the words and connections you made. I do believe that death and love are closely intertwined together and think you described that nicely. I like the lines:
You look at me,

With your beautiful eyes.

You look right through me,

Like I was never alive….

[Nila M.]

Why does romantic love have this effect on people? It's interesting to think about. Nothing else feels so emotionally good and bad as love can. These types of feelings slowly fade in time, but it never feels like it will when you're in the midst of a heartbreak.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review...

[bubblefet]

i enjoyed it but i did feal like from the visable to the like this to you was kinda SQUIRREL! like this or it could of been guilt mayby sometimes its hard to say just in case they ever find this so you backpaddle just a bit

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Wow. I have to say, this was a bit overwhelming to read the first time around.
Death is a very sensitive subject, so to have the testericular integrity to write about it, is very kudos to you.
With that being said, I have no fear of death at all. It intrigues me. So this was also fantastic to read. To see someone else's view. I really liked the first two lines, as I have felt like that many, many times.
This was really great.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)
i am glad u liked it

[Luna Zerimar]

Very upsetting.

It just seems like a person is mistreating another person terribly.

Which, I can relate to.

...Maybe that's why it upset me.

Good read. x

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Mary Bradley]

Very good concept ...but on this one I feel confuse ... sorry maybe it's me who can't understand it .
Thank you for sharing . Maybe you can tell me what it is about :-)

[Daisy]

great poem and wise choice of words...... well done

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)