Life

A small poem but i think soo true .......

Life changes in every second

We never know what will happen

We smile

We cry

We win

We lose

It turn around so quickly

That why life is a subtle puzzle…

Life…..life lives, life dies.

Life laughs, life cries.

Life gives up, life tries.

Life is not measured by the breaths we take,

But by the moments that take our….

   BREATH AWAY

Author's Note

Hope u r gonna like this.... :)

Reviews

[Lavender Soya]

It started out captivating and ended up wonderfully. Thank you for sharing! :-)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thank u... :)

[Lavender Soya]

My pleasure :-)

[jonah]

a good depiction of what's going on in and around life. it's short and to the point. you bring a nice reminder of life, Salman. but, I felt like I've ever heard of the last line so many times. it sounds good. but I think you may wanna try to express the point of it with your own ideas and emotions so it won't sound dull. anyway, keep it up! always bring up the best in you :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Mary Bradley]

Quite sentimental poem . Good read and good piece .
Moments that took our breath away are few in life but it stay forever for the rest of our lifetime . I like it and thank you for sharing

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"life is subtle puzzle"...bang on my friend.... good read

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Daisy]

yes sooo true.... The moments which took our breath away constitute real life.....
Wonderful poem and awesome concept...... great job writing it

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks Daisy for the review :)

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Absolutely true! Loved it! Esply the lines 'life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away!' Thanks for sharing this brilliant piece of poetry!☺

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[luvs2write]

Very cool poem, and interesting concept. =) I only noticed two typos...other than that, this was great! Especially like the last three lines...keep writing. =)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review i am glad u liked it.... :)