Life

A small poem but i think soo true .......

Life changes in every second

We never know what will happen

We smile

We cry

We win

We lose

It turn around so quickly

That why life is a subtle puzzle…

Life…..life lives, life dies.

Life laughs, life cries.

Life gives up, life tries.

Life is not measured by the breaths we take,

But by the moments that take our….

   BREATH AWAY

Author's Note

Hope u r gonna like this.... :)

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up and well penned!

[closed]

very quaint truth
set to poetry


-Dream

[Lizardo]

Every second of life is ever year of life- Lizardo xD
I love this poem, your vision of what is life is simply thought provoking and beautiful.
Great poem, another fine piece of work from you :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[TheLostMind]

You have captured the essence of life in this one.
"Life is not measured by the breaths we take,
But by the moments that take our….
BREATH AWAY" - couldn't agree more. A really good write.:)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks m glad u liked it.....

[Nila M.]

Very nice last line! Not the breaths we take but what takes our breath away. Well said. I need to remember this.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review #Nila :)

[Deepika]

So true! Life's like a journey of which you are the driver.Some routes might not be familiar, but that's the beauty of the journey!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[SheDragon16]

I love this piece. It's short and simple but yet some what complex. very meaningful. Keep up the good work Ov3R_sKiLl3D. -DRAGON

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)thanks for the review :)

[Emily]

Lovely wording!!
Well done!!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[lovergirl]

so true !! well said lil-brother ;) nice piece

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Valentine]

Now this one I really enjoyed. The ending three lines are superb. Valentine

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)