Do you Think

This is a poem I'm writing for at least 1 week.....

Do you think I’ve told you

That I love you enough?

 

Have I let you know without you,

Life would be extremely tough?

 

You’re everything that gives me

A reason to live

 

I love you more than you could know

You are my one true love,

 

For those times when I felt empty,

I just act like insanity.

 

For those moments of indecisiveness,

I was filled with unsatisfactory loneliness.

 

For those instance for isolation,

I was willing for desperation.

 

Fate controls who walks into your life,

But you decide who you let walk out,

Who you let stay,

And who you refuse to let go.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you are gonna enjoy reading it....... :)

Reviews

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Your 'Do you think' is a very beautiful and lovely poem! Thanks for sharing it! I enjoyed reading it!☺

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Mary Bradley]

Beautiful and quite lovely Poem .
Well written and nice flow in it . Thank you for sharing

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review i am glad u liked it :)

[~]

I can tell your skill is improving my friend. I liked how you used the noun - insanity and you embodying it. Thank you for sharing.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for reviewing and i am glad u liked it..... :)

[lovergirl]

Damn boy !! it's like we're having the same life hh , i love this one a lot and i also have this person who i love so much but i never could really show him enough , you're right in the last part so choose carefully ;) and thanks for letting us read

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review C>G... :)

[lovergirl]

you're very welcome ;)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

..........:)

[luvs2write]

I really like the flow of this poem. You did a great job with the rhyming too. =) Nice work.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[Ishita Dixit]

Fate controls who walks into your life,
But you decide who you let walk out,
Who you let stay,
And who you refuse to let go.

So true! I too am an ardent believer of fate. I think you did a great job expressing a lover's feelings.
Keep it up! :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks Ishita m glad u liked it :)