Do you Think

This is a poem I'm writing for at least 1 week.....

Do you think I’ve told you

That I love you enough?

 

Have I let you know without you,

Life would be extremely tough?

 

You’re everything that gives me

A reason to live

 

I love you more than you could know

You are my one true love,

 

For those times when I felt empty,

I just act like insanity.

 

For those moments of indecisiveness,

I was filled with unsatisfactory loneliness.

 

For those instance for isolation,

I was willing for desperation.

 

Fate controls who walks into your life,

But you decide who you let walk out,

Who you let stay,

And who you refuse to let go.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you are gonna enjoy reading it....... :)

Reviews

[closed]

I loved this one
youre good at these kinds of poems OS


-Dream

[ashleymarie]

This was a really good read!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your kind words :)

[Nila M.]

It's nice to read these fresh sentiments about love. Sometimes as we get older we tend to lose the magic a little and see love from a different perspective. It's so nice to see it in this form from someone who really feels it.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Cool Girl]

Wonderful job!! :) :) :) :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :) I'm glad u liked it..

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome! :)

[Valentine]

I really like the wording of the last stanza, it speaks the truth. Valentine

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Emily]

Love your wording and the meaning of it!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[jonah]

this one sounds so sentimental, Salman :)) it's sweet when we find the one who we think will walk beside us through life. then, when it feels so strong, when it's overflowing we identify this complicated emotion. maybe we'll call it love. but, no one knows. life is very unpredictable. good one. keep it up!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :) Jonah really glad u liked it..

[CA Anurag Sharma]

good one.... a very good read again

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Deepika]

I like the way you've organised those beautiful lines! Good read(y)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review..

[Daisy]

great poem with wonderful concept..... good job

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

i am glad u liked it :)