Die Alone

This is a poem of people doing this every day......

Die alone 

Every one in this world come alone, live alone and die alone,

This world just drops a bunch of rules on top of you,

To make you forget the facts,but i never forget.

I'm living like there's no tomorrow ,

Because there isn't one,

I wish i could say i'm okay,

But that would be a lie.......

I am too tired to even flirt,

I struggle through each day....

Some days I just wish to die.....,And

I guess this is all there is,

And maybe i'm out of luck,

The pain it brings can not compare,

To the joy she knows will soon be there,

It's worth the scars that never heal,

For just a moment,not to feel....

Every one in this world come alone,live alone and die alone.........

Author's Note

Hope you guys enjoy reading this poem.....

Reviews

[Ibidun]

Hmm... Confessions of the depressed. I like the fact that it sheds light on the thoughts we've all had at a point it our lives. The beauty of living lies in the fact that we do not live alone. Friends and family make life worth living. Touching exposure, there is reality in this piece.

[closed]

very existential

this is a dark direction to go in
but I think it could work

in any case, another great work by you
keep it up


-Dream

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[closed]

you're welcome

and I'm not sure what your religious beliefs are
but know that there is hope beyond this life for those who know Christ

[Emily]

Great poem!
All the words fit perfectly together!
Keep it up!!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[jonah]

uhum good piece you have here, Salman. it sounds so depressed. sometimes life puts a really heavy weight on our back. but, you know, we always have reasons to rise again. we have people who love us, even though maybe not many. keep it up, Salman! get up and enjoy life! :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thank you fo the review ;)

[Nila M.]

It's hard to come to terms with these kinds of feelings. Sometimes it's difficult to find the point when you always see so much of the same thing. But then you find little bits of wonderful things in the world that somehow make it worthwhile. I've had these kinds of thoughts from time to time as well.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review..... :)

[Lizardo]

Its true, sometimes we just want to die..
But we have to keep going forward!
Great work!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review .......

[Mary Bradley]

Live to the fullest ! I agree to that :-) good piece !
Too tired to flirt but not too tired to write a good poem ! :-)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[Ishita Dixit]

Too tired to flirt eh?
Nice poem. Very honest. :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[Ishita Dixit]

You're welcome!

[Daisy]

wow such mature thoughts..... thumbs up for you.... it really is something people don't think because of fear to die....
Really amazing....

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review I am glad u liked it :)

[Valentine]

Too tired to even flirt, perhaps it is your eyesight that needs glasses. I know even old men take a peek at younger ladies. Its called Human Nature. Valentine

[Daisy]

hahhaha that's so true...... but i think there are really some who are tired to flirt.....

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Hahahahahaha true XD
Thanks for the review :)