WAY BACK HOME

IT WAS A POEM OF CHILD WHO WAS committing suicide......

The road back home is the,
Only way more and more,
With each day it's more,
Evident this world is not for me.
I tried suicide when I was 10,
People who really know me think,
I'm just a disease, a cancer that erases away,
I never get to see your precious face,
Or whisper a word in your ears to feel you're safe.

I will never get to fall asleep in your arms,
I will never get to hear you laugh and giggle.
Before committing suicide I realized one thing...
If you don't remember who you really are,
You can't find your way back home...
I turn away my face and,
Find my way back home...

Author's Note

Hope you are gonna like this....

Reviews

[Lavender Soya]

This composition creates an image of reality in my head. Good job! it's a good read.

[yvo miki]

wow this was deep and I know how u feel

[Valentine]

In our area are many little children living with foster parents. Some attend my church, many have confused thoughts as to where their real home is. A sad and deep write. Kathie

[Elie Marie]

I like this, especially the 'if you don't remember who you really are you can't find your way back home...'
nicely done.

[Chris]

dark IS a reality - too easy to get lost in... at any age. Strong thoughts need being spoken.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

I am glad u liked it :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

nice topic and very well written,,,,,but suicide at 10!!! anyway good one.....

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[jonah]

another topic to focus on. good work, Salman. suicide is a complicated reality we're facing. the way you express it portrays the sad reality of the tragedy that can happen even in young age. keep it up!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[Mary Bradley]

Sad and dark poem ! ... no matter what there's enough love within ourselves to shine a light on our life to find our way back home ... darkness recede with believe :-)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thank for your review :)

[Cool Girl]

Wow, I'm speechless.. This was so wonderful..

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Cool Girl]

welcome!!:)

[Daisy]

it's a strong sentence.... you can't find your way back home........ first realize who you are then try to learn where is your home turn back and find it........ amazing wonderful piece pf poetry......

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

i am glad u liked it :)