WHAT IS LIFE

A poem which is pretty much true........

WHAT IS LIFE

What is life,
life is a puzzle,

Sometime it’s tough,

Sometimes it’s simple…

Sometimes you find your way-

Sometimes you simply just lose… lose your way,

What is life?

Good?

Bad?

Sometimes you’re  wrong, and sometimes you’re  right,

What is life?

Some say it’s from birth to death,

So what’s between birth and death?

It is a choice,

Our life is just… just a matter of choices,

Live well and it will never go wrong.

Author's Note

Hope you guys are gonna like this poem .... :)

Reviews

[Chris]

May I suggest something? Don't write for others' acceptance ...write to express YOUR thoughts, your way. Have opinions, learn, have heart, help when you can, make choices and accept responsibility for them - do things and above all be yourself.

What IS life... living.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

ok m gonna keep that in mind but thanks for the review...... :)

[Chris]

anytime... take care.

[hardeep sabharwal]

interesting subject, life is what we want to see,,
I enjoyed this poem :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review .... :)

[stars are far]

that was very well said writing, and i believe in what you say, but sometimes you dont have the choice ,you are just like a toy being moved from one place to another and you have to face everything you fall on. so i think that also life is about being able to face everything.
Well done, and that was a wise thought. keep it up

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review and yeah u are right that life is about being able to face every thing............ :)

[stars are far]

welcome to the club (writerscafe) :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks........ :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

our life is just a matter of choices... you summed it very well ... :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review :)

[TheLostMind]

A really good write :). I agree with almost every line except this one - "Our life is just… just a matter of choices". it's not that easy. All the choices provided to us will be correct. The only thing we can do is trust our instincts and choose a path.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

i agree with you but u have to make so many choices too...... But anyways thanks for the review :)

[closed]

a strong reflection of your philosophy

thanks again for sharing your work, that we learn more about you

a great pen is in the making

-Dream

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for the review :)

[Lizardo]

Its all in the poem, thats life
Wrong or bad, decisions, living it
all is life
Good work!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks bro I am really glad that you liked it :)

[Lizardo]

You're welcome! :)

[Cool Girl]

Very very true.. Nice job:)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thank u C.G I am glad that you liked it :)

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome

[Anonymous -]

People are so focused on the ending or the begining of a story , to realize the story was amd is always in the middle. Not sure that has anything to do with what you wrote , sorry. I liked your poem though !

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[Nila M.]

This is very true, and life can be a huge mix of opposing feelings. I guess that's why we all think about it so much. Doing the right thing when you can choose does make a huge difference though. And sometimes people, including me, have had to learn that the hard way. Thanks for sharing this!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)