WHAT IS LIFE

A poem which is pretty much true........

WHAT IS LIFE

What is life,
life is a puzzle,

Sometime it’s tough,

Sometimes it’s simple…

Sometimes you find your way-

Sometimes you simply just lose… lose your way,

What is life?

Good?

Bad?

Sometimes you’re  wrong, and sometimes you’re  right,

What is life?

Some say it’s from birth to death,

So what’s between birth and death?

It is a choice,

Our life is just… just a matter of choices,

Live well and it will never go wrong.

Author's Note

Hope you guys are gonna like this poem .... :)

Reviews

[Elie Marie]

this is wonderful. such a great reminder.

[The StoryTeller]

This is another one I have trouble talking to you about, because not only did I work on it with you, but I already told you what I thought. XD I do think however, that this really shows how humans philosophize over things that we can't control, and how we are just a speck in time. But the way we spend our speck of time that has been allotted to us is our choice, and we should live it to the best we can. :)

"Live As If You're Gonna Die"
"In thᴉƧ wØrld wə lᴉv&.."

-Resilient
-Blade

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review blade :)

[The StoryTeller]

No problem man, no problem. :)

[Benedict Mdluli]

I'm mesmerized to the core beautiful piece.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Wow! Reading this poem gave me a feeling of deja vu, coz I have written a similar poem just today-
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Life's Key

If DEATH is the ultimate destiny
One might sometime wonder
Why bother with birth
Suffer from living
And succumb to death

For LIFE- the Inbetween
It is as hard as it is easy
It is as easy as it is hard
The puzzle called Life
Answer is to find a key

The key to puzzle of life- YOU
The journey of your life
From birth to death
It is as good as you want it
It is as bad as you make it
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Everything put aside... I have enjoyed reading your poem! It is a great piece of work! Thanks for sharing it, Ov3R_sKiLl3D!😄☺

[Benedict Mdluli]

Wow!!! Wow I love this too big I feel like quitting school just to pursue poetry pliz stop writing wonderful poems like these. Thank you!!!

"If DEATH is the ultimate destiny
One might sometime wonder
Why bother with birth
Suffer from living
And succumb to death" - TRUE

[Emily]

Lovely like always!
Well done!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review glad u liked it :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

I really enjoyed the light and fresh air flowing down in this poem ,Beautiful write !

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

I am glad that you liked it :)

[blue angel]

I love this poem, it reminds me of one I wrote when I first started my writing journey. An acrostic poem, I'll share it with you below, if you don't mind. Thanks for sharing this poem! Respectfully, blue angel

Life is full of paths not taken ~ find yours, and you won't be mistaken.
Over mountains we must climb ~ from the top, the view is divine.
Ventures into the abyss ~ has stumbling blocks, you shan't miss.
Every moment should be cherished ~ if you don't then you're careless.

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~Life is not a puzzle or game, but it's challenging
just the same. I hope you seize what's most important among these?

The choices you make can unravel at the seams. Yet, without these experiences, you really didn't follow your dreams!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for tour review and i liked you poem it have the same meaning but a different way of describing i like your poem thou.... :)

[blue angel]

Thanks. Yours is straight forward. I have tendency to go the long way around things. I truly enjoyed your query usage. I thinks that's what prompted me to share mine. Like giving answers to some unanswered thoughts. My first four letters is truly all that needs to be given, and received while we are on our personal journey's of life. :)

[Deepika]

With your simple words you've summed up the mystery of life..good write! :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review i am glad that you liked it .... :)

[A. Amos]

Life is life....la la la...Opus!

Enjoyed the read, keep writing my friend.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review....... i am really glad that you liked it :)