This is another one I have trouble talking to you about, because not only did I work on it with you, but I already told you what I thought. XD I do think however, that this really shows how humans philosophize over things that we can't control, and how we are just a speck in time. But the way we spend our speck of time that has been allotted to us is our choice, and we should live it to the best we can. :)
"Live As If You're Gonna Die"
"In thᴉƧ wØrld wə lᴉv&.."
Wow! Reading this poem gave me a feeling of deja vu, coz I have written a similar poem just today-
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Life's Key
If DEATH is the ultimate destiny
One might sometime wonder
Why bother with birth
Suffer from living
And succumb to death
For LIFE- the Inbetween
It is as hard as it is easy
It is as easy as it is hard
The puzzle called Life
Answer is to find a key
The key to puzzle of life- YOU
The journey of your life
From birth to death
It is as good as you want it
It is as bad as you make it
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Everything put aside... I have enjoyed reading your poem! It is a great piece of work! Thanks for sharing it, Ov3R_sKiLl3D!😄☺
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Wow!!! Wow I love this too big I feel like quitting school just to pursue poetry pliz stop writing .. read moreWow!!! Wow I love this too big I feel like quitting school just to pursue poetry pliz stop writing wonderful poems like these. Thank you!!!
"If DEATH is the ultimate destiny
One might sometime wonder
Why bother with birth
Suffer from living
And succumb to death" - TRUE
I love this poem, it reminds me of one I wrote when I first started my writing journey. An acrostic poem, I'll share it with you below, if you don't mind. Thanks for sharing this poem! Respectfully, blue angel
Life is full of paths not taken ~ find yours, and you won't be mistaken.
Over mountains we must climb ~ from the top, the view is divine.
Ventures into the abyss ~ has stumbling blocks, you shan't miss.
Every moment should be cherished ~ if you don't then you're careless.
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~Life is not a puzzle or game, but it's challenging
just the same. I hope you seize what's most important among these?
The choices you make can unravel at the seams. Yet, without these experiences, you really didn't follow your dreams!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for tour review and i liked you poem it have the same meaning but a different way of describi.. read moreThanks for tour review and i liked you poem it have the same meaning but a different way of describing i like your poem thou.... :)
9 Years Ago
Thanks. Yours is straight forward. I have tendency to go the long way around things. I truly enjoyed.. read moreThanks. Yours is straight forward. I have tendency to go the long way around things. I truly enjoyed your query usage. I thinks that's what prompted me to share mine. Like giving answers to some unanswered thoughts. My first four letters is truly all that needs to be given, and received while we are on our personal journey's of life. :)
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