FAITH

This is a poem about something called FAITH hop you are gonna like this :-)

FAITH

 

 

Once in a life, when unprepared

Death fronted us, it was night

The air was cool, and the season was

Falling

The sky was clean, and the moon was

Smiling

And we were afraid

My parents told us

Where is your Faith?

Being afraid is not the solution,

We live in hope,

We sleep on dreams,

Look up to the sky,

And see what seems,

To be a star shinning down;

As they place broken crown

It’s now our time

We sit and pray

We look out into the night

To see what’s wrong and what’s right

Then I realize,

FAITH and LOVE

Are two

Complementary souls,

FAITH is the heart of LOVE,

And LOVE is the breath of FAITH.

Author's Note

Nope you guys are gonna like this poem......

Reviews

[Daisy]

wonderful poem.............. faith and love and two in one......
Such expression and the concept awesome and speechless

[The StoryTeller]

I remember this one too, this was another one I really liked. I couldn't really tell you why exactly, it's hard to put it into words, but I guess it's great because of the message it preaches and because of the way it tells you to rely on Faith, even when things get hard, even when you're facing some of the worst things, death included. Keep writing. :)

"Live As If You're Gonna Die"
"In thᴉƧ wØrld wə lᴉvə ᴉn..."

-Resilient
-Blade

[closed]

this is the best ive read from you yet
love this concept

and how you tied everything together

-Dream

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review :)

[Mary Bradley]

Interesting poem . Your last 2 lines make me deep in thought ... is there faith in my love ? ... I need to search it in me :-)
Thank you for sharing .

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

I am glad that u liked it :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

"FAITH is the heart of LOVE,
And LOVE is the breath of FAITH."

Well this one is impressing, You have rolled a talent here dear ,very nice

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thank you R3D :)

[Valentine]

Love is the breath of faith, I love that line. God inspired this write and we both thank you for it. Valentine

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thank you for your review m really glad that u liked my poem :)

[Valentine]

You are very welcome. Kathie

[Emily]

I love it!
I don't see many poems about Faith vary often.
Well done!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thank you for your review :)

[luvs2write]

I'm glad that you posted it. =) And yeah, I think it's one of my favorites from you. Keep writing!!

[Ishita Dixit]

We sleep on dreams! ♥
Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

No thanks for reviewing

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

...................:)

[Thayle L.]

Fine work on this one. Have you considered turning these into inspiritianonal quote a day books? Just a thought that popped it.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review and i tried to turn this thing in an inspirational quote........,. :)