Don't let you go

This is a poem i experienced in my life hope you are gonna like it

Don't let you go, never let you go, 

In the dark and in the bad,

Don't let you go never let you go,

I may not get to see you as often as i like,

I may not get to hold you in my arms,

But deep in my heart i truly know,

You are the one that i LOVE,

i am going to smile,

and make you think i am happy,

So you don't see me cry,

I am going to let you go in style 

and even if it kills me

i am going to smile,......But

Don't let you go, never let you go...

Author's Note

Hope you are gonna like this poem

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Loved to read this words, every line holds rhythm of true love.Beautiful write !

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for such kind words from you .................=)

[yvo miki]

oh wow i like this poem it tells a message in a short poem its nice u have someone special to call urs and will stick by them is nice

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thank you i am glad that you liked it ................ :)

[yvo miki]

your welcome

[The StoryTeller]

I like this, the message it conveys that so many people do, the desperation... The fact that you care about someone enough in your pain that you'd do your best to keep them happy no matter how much you hurt is remarkable and beautiful... Great write. :)

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Well done!!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thank you =)

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Far from your eyes, but near to the door-step of your heart- One theme this piece depicts! It's really nice.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

very Sweet..........
nice emotions.....
i liked it!!
:)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[ANTO]

Tanks CG for this sending me to this one - so bittersweetly written. Not letting them see how broke up we are is gallant but controlling our behaviour during such turmoil would in my opinion be way beyond most people's ken
Thanks OS for sharing

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your awesome review i was not sure that anyone gonna like it but every one of u liked it thanks =)

[Lavender Soya]

It's quite lyrical, great rhythm. :-)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review =)

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome. :-)

[Lizardo]

Such a beautiful poem, your poetry is really good my friend
A long distance separtes us..
Amazing poem, it's really good :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review =)

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[Jamestown]

Letting go is never easy, this is totally understandable, Thanks for sharing.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Its my pleasure to share it with you guyz