Don't let you go

This is a poem i experienced in my life hope you are gonna like it

Don't let you go, never let you go, 

In the dark and in the bad,

Don't let you go never let you go,

I may not get to see you as often as i like,

I may not get to hold you in my arms,

But deep in my heart i truly know,

You are the one that i LOVE,

i am going to smile,

and make you think i am happy,

So you don't see me cry,

I am going to let you go in style 

and even if it kills me

i am going to smile,......But

Don't let you go, never let you go...

Author's Note

Hope you are gonna like this poem

Reviews

[Ishita Dixit]

'I am going too let you go in style.'
Wow!
I loved the whole idea of holding back your
true feelings from your lover.
Amazing write.
Thanks for sharing!

[foufa la perle]

Beautiful. I love this poem, jsut so amazing. Simple but meaningful. :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks..........:)

[foufa la perle]

welcome! :)

[closed]

I like how adamant this one is
it works really well




-Dream

[Chain of Hearts]

Very simple, but effective. I love how you portray this story in such a delicate, meaningful way. :)
Keep on writing!

[Moonlight]

It is a really heartfelt poem. It expresses the sadness in the poet's heart so beautifully. The pain and the hurt in the poet's heart has surfaced through your words so amazingly that I, as a reader, felt it piercing my own heart. Great work! Thank you for sharing! :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for reviewing I am glad u looked it :)

[Moonlight]

My pleasure! :)

[Mary Bradley]

Heartfelt and lovely poem . In my opinion love will eventually kill the person whose love is unrequited . In the sense of living in despair where the beauty of life pass in a blurry images .

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

I am glad that u liked it :)

[Chris]

Break-ups are as personal as life gets... but sometimes two are not meant to be one. And "forced" caring isn't love at all. Seems emotional rollercoasters are a way of life for some.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for the review :)

[Thayle L.]

An excellent first piece, but I noticed grammatical errors

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Yeah i know i have some typos and i am working on it...

[~]

a heartfelt chant or wish to keep the one you love close to you.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Wow. I really loved this one. It makes me think of the situation I am in now. Especially the lines "I may not get to hold you in my arms,
But deep in my heart i truly know,
You are the one that i LOVE"
Really feeling it right now.
Great piece!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your review :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

You're very welcome!