MOM

Its a poem about a lady who like to talk with us and hope to spend her life with her.......

There are Angels God put on this Earth,

Who care for us and guide us;

You can feel their LOV3 and gentleness,

As they walk in our life beside us;

they do great things for us every day,

They whisper in our ears and tell us what to do;

they hold us in their H3ART and LIFE,

When we are all filled with our FEARS;

God blessed me with an Angel,

i am proud to call her own;

She has been there throughout my life,

protected me from the dark and bads;

She guided me the best she can,

and We call that person a 

                   MOM

Author's Note

This was a poem i wrote in grade 9, hope you guys are gonna like this ............... :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. A beautiful poem for mom. You honor yourself and mother with the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your kind words ...... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Anything about dear mother. I will read.

[Emily]

I love it!!
I read it to my mom, she loved it too!
Keep it up!!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review =)

[Lizardo]

It's a beautiful poem about our mothers, they are truely angels
Beautiful poem!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

thanks for your awesome review.............. =)

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[Cool Girl]

Hey!! I'm C.G.
Sorry for the late introduction... :p
I love music and have a passion for writing, so yeah! xD You can learn more by reading my profile:)

I really like your poem! I think you have talent! Keep on writing and you'll get better. I've definately improved I'm the last couple months. You can check out my writing if you'd like or read some of my earlier pieces which are not as good as the ones I write now xD
Feel free to send me read requests or messages anytime! I'd love to help in any way by reviewing, reading, suggesting, answering questions, or just talking in general:)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Thanks for your review and keep connected =)

[Cool Girl]

Twas a pleasure :D

[luvs2write]

I like this one, it's sweet. =) I do suggest that you capatilize each word at the beginning of each line. It's not that big of a deal...just a grammar thing. Nice work though, I want to read more...keep writing!!

[The StoryTeller]

Oh, by the way, this is my friend I was telling you about. :)

[The StoryTeller]

The one who wrote this.

[The StoryTeller]

I liked it Salman, although, I think that you meant "call her my own" not "call her own". I think it was good. And if this is something you wrote in grade 9, where's your work now? I'd like to see some more writing, as of current. And since you're my best friend and go to school with me, I won't leave you alone till you do. :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Yeah i am gonna write one more tonight hope u r gonna like it :)

[The StoryTeller]

Okay, I'm sure you'll show me today in school. :p

[The StoryTeller]

By the way, I don't know if I did it right, but to get you more views I sent read requests for this poem to a few of my friends.

[The StoryTeller]

I've never sent read requests for anything other than my own work so...

[luvs2write]

Yes, you did it right cuz I got one.

[The StoryTeller]

Okay, sounds good. :D