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its about the pain i experienced..............

Don't LOVE the person,

Who enjoys with you......,

Love the person who really suffers without you;

My pain turned to sadness and my sadness to anger,

My anger grew into hate and i have forgotten how to smile;

But then i realize..........

Nobody can take away your pain,

so don't let anyone take away your

                   HAPPINESS 

Author's Note

............... :)

Reviews

[The StoryTeller]

I think this has a double meaning. I think it means that a.) those who are with you and love you and they've only seen you have a good day aren't those you should love, because they haven't seen you at your worst, and they might not stay around once they see it, while those that see it and stick around are the ones you should love. I also think this is b.) about loving your enemy (as God says) and a call to not let anyone take away your happiness, no matter how much it hurts, and to love them no matter what they do, because that's the person you are, and to not sink to their level. I don't know if I got that right or not.... Anyways, I liked it!

"Live As If You're Gonna Die"
"In thᴉƧ wØrld wə lᴉvə ᴉn..."

-Resilient
-Blade

[Mary Bradley]

Very truthful poem . Good work . Quite right ...we'd fight for our love and happiness as no one else would hand them to us for free :-)

[luvs2write]

I like this, it's an interesting truth. It reminds me of a quote from a book I just finished, Everybody Sees the Ants. "Nobody can pee on your soul without your permission." Hmm...well, it would make more sense if you read the book. Keep writing!!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

ThAnkS fOr YoUr FEEDBACK i m gonna read the book but thanks for ur feedback :)

[luvs2write]

You're welcome. =)