Botch

talks about sin, temptation and guilt, teens, peerpressure

BOTCH   (part 1)

 

The hardest challenge for me,                                                  Is to abate under the almighty.           My human abyss traps me, and here I am seen to be unable to escape.          The life of what may possibly end up being sin,                                                       Seems so ample, so tempting, so absurdly absorbent..

Although,              I am most certain of the wisdom                That same wisdom that I obtain from he who rules                                               The knowledge that says I need him                  That he has always been there, even without me requesting              The sagacity inside that reminds me his words are truth and to listen would not only be wise ,  But would be best.

But what is my problem?           Why can I not just obey?                                             Oh, I know,                                                                      Because I am afraid.              Afraid to lose all these people, all this so called ‘love’ that gives me satisfaction.            I grave the fact all of them will turn away,                                                                   Turn and leave me here                 Never to be seen smiling again…

 

Author's Note

mind all the spaces in between the words, I tried to make it neater :)

Reviews

[justdandy]

Spectacular poem. This is exactly the pressure we experience these days. This is a spectacular poem. May God bless you.

[RuBee]

thank you, glad it made sense