solicituos

solicituos

A Poem by RuBee
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how much people hardly care or trust one another anymore..

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SOLICITUOS

Is it not time that we realize what our world has become?                                        Are we so blind that we do not see our purpose for being alive?

 

Chanting the words ' if only I could do this for ME, or soon I will be. Whatever happened to loving our neighbours and taking care of them as we would ourselves?

 All our care for the next person has been absorbed by greed, lust and mostly heartbreak.

 

 

In our world, one is considered a fool for having solicitous feelings towards another

 Yet that is as it should be.

 

All that's left to say is that,

 The wars, mistakes and misdirection of those in the past have ruined our ancestors’ lives in relationships

 Thus causing hope for ours, to be buried as well.

 

Trust and faith have abandoned us

 And we no longer see the light among one another

 No one is to be trusted

 And your heart is yours to protect.

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2015 RuBee


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RuBee
mind grammer and tell me what you think if its relatable or untrue

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Very true! This is really beautiful and both sad in truth. You have EYES! many do not, most just live .. You have a strong mind and open heart. It shows through your words.. Nice piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


RuBee

9 Years Ago

thank you, this made my day! I just felt like writing about it as it was a reality in mine and many .. read more
silent poet

9 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊

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Added on June 1, 2015
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Tags: care, love, loneliness, trust

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RuBee
RuBee

durban, christian, South Africa



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I love writing, and I am a total book worm, I write to entertain and when inspired and I also write about my feelings. my music plays a big part in my writing as well, i'm here to meet other like me more..

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