Rain

Into each life some rain must fall.

RAIN

The rain slips from her fingers

like lost hope inside her heart

one by one they fall like diamonds

shattering the pieces of her soul

Love like rain slips from her grasp

unable to hold on she is aware

that it won't wash away the pain

as the rain continues falling...falling

The rain slips from her fingers

ending it all beneath her feet

Reviews

[Relic]

It would be nice if rain could wash away our pain. I'd stand in it as long as it took...among the crowd.

[Dave]

To lose someone that is so dearly loved is about the most painful thing I can imagine. It is so obvious the love that was and still is there.

Take care - Dave

[Papaya]

Losing love is so painful, I understand this feeling.
Well done.

[Avelina Devi]

Thanks Ana xx

[Ardra]

It's beautiful..... the pain is palpable in your words.... rain like lost hope and love that we have no power over....loved this one..... I love rain too because we can cry freely in it...and not worry if anyone will notice our tears..... :)

[Avelina Devi]

Thank you :) and very true in what you say