Please....

Please....

A Poem by Red
"

A response to my girlfriend's poem.

"
You say you feel awkward.
I don't know what that means.
Do I make you uncomfortable.
You say its because you love me, yet if you love me, shouldn't you be feeling comfort?
I feel comfort when I'm around you.
I feel loved and taken care of.
Do you not feel that around me?
You write a poem about it.
You feel awkward because you don't know the words to use.
If its true, I've failed.
I've failed because I've told you that I don't care.
Your presence brings joy enough.
You don't have to be Shakespeare for me to love you.
The words you've been using made me fall in love with you already.
So please...
Feel comfort and love when I'm around.
Don't fill yourself with the feeling of awkwardness. 

© 2018 Red


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Added on April 19, 2018
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Red
Red

Burlington VT, VT



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