Mind in Pandemonium

A requiem sung for the lost refuge,

Crumpled pieces buried down.

For the world left underneath the ground,

Won’t hear the call of the damned

 

In a realm ruled in insanity,

A glimpse of light shone through her eyes.

The kind of light which you would hold dear

For your fear of the dark rises as she departs

 

You guarded her heart,

You guided her soul.

But not until the cruel fate,

willed to set you apart.

 

As the long nights grew longer,

You longed silently,

Feeding your thoughts,

Asking yourself.

 

Why? How?

How could you wake up

With your hands on a bloody knife

And why,

Why is it stuck on her heart?

Author's Note

hoping for constructive criticisms, thank you!

Reviews

[Ehra Khan]

Great vocabulary. Excellent flow. Thanks for sharing 😀

[Nyght]

Thank you! :)

[Kami]

Excellent ending! Didn't see that coming. Thank you for sharing!

[Nyght]

thank you! :)