Walk Alone

I walk alone

With no one to hold

Sometimes wondering why I was born

My heart feels cold

With no one to love

Everyone I love is gone

 

No one's here

No one's near

I cry

I try

To understand the reason why

 

Why am I in despair?

Why am I in loneliness’ snare

Leaving my only heart bare

 

I walk alone

With no one to hold

Finally I am done

You can go

Just want you to know

Let this be our end…

Author's Note

This was the first poem/song i had ever done. Please give me your opinion and what needs improvement

Reviews

[RavenWells]

The format confused me a little, but the poem itself is pretty good. Nice job.

[Mingel]

oh thank you c: (i love your profile picture)