oh my god.... I'm awestruck!!!
this is an emotional as well as strong piece. I'd like to read the next part soon.... gd luck!!
this is amazing!! relatable to me...
Thanks for the review. Much appreciated. Ch 2 is up btw.
8 Years Ago
Great going with writing!!!
I'd like to suggest you to put up the idea of making this a best .. read moreGreat going with writing!!!
I'd like to suggest you to put up the idea of making this a best selling novel....
Friends are here to help... I m ready... And you need to go ahead with this awesome plot....
I really enjoyed reading this! I love your poetic & lyrical way of writing prose. I love the way you showed us the intricacies of this friendship thru description & dialogue. It's great the way you balanced between the idea of this close friendship being all above-board with the spouses, yet also hinting at something else, something that makes us want to continue reading (if there were other chapters, etc.) I could feel the quiet longing between the lines.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for the review....I am thinking of adding more chapters. Will work on it.
"When you can't change the world and you don't want to change yourself. The only thing you can do is create a new world."
I write to express myself, my views and my opinions.
So this is my world. .. more..