She is.....

She is.......

The blood in my veins

She is........

The truth behind my lies

She is........

The first drops of rain

She is.......

The hidden garden in my heart

She is.......

The dew on the mountain top

She is.......

The first drop of wine

She is.........

The orchid of the wild

She is........

The lost child of time

She is........

The cool breeze on a hot summer

She is.......

The first light of dawn

She is.......

The rhythm to my song

She is........

The verse to my poetry.

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

This is wonderful. It is very clever. I really think this show how much you care about whom ever she is. You are saying she is your better half. This flows so greatly. You did a very nice job. Yours truely a mad lord

[Nwang]

Thank you for your review!

[Bala Gorthi]

Your 'She is' is very beautifully presented. That's how it feels.
Good poetry and very cleverly written.
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.:-):-):-)

[Ayushi Beura]

Interesting, the title itself creates the curiosity... N lovely expressed about "she"...awesome poem

[Nwang]

Thank you :D

[Anindita Janhabee]

She is.... just amazing..
Nwang, I don't know if this is a fiction or a non fiction. All that I can say for this verse is about the excellent feelings put... The type of sentences you have framed, being similar, provoke so many different ideas and supports but each line has the same feeling called love. She is really very lucky to have such a great poet... My dear, it's a great job again. The striking emotion put here sound amazing. Each piece that we dedicate to someone are always comparatively good... I liked the words u hv put like dew in mountains, first rain, first light of sun, rhythm to song and verse to poem....wow... simplicity flowing all around... very sweet my dear...
Anindita : )

[Nwang]

Thank you @Anidita your words instill me with inspiration.

[Anindita Janhabee]

by the way, is she a reality ??

[Nwang]

She kind of is, actually this poem is my dedication to all the women who have hadcan impact on my life. So it includes my sisters, mom etc.

[Anindita Janhabee]

ohh.. then it's really very nice...

[Arooj Purra]

Wow! love your poem .nice piece of writing.Keep on writing.

[Nwang]

Thank you @Arooj

[Arooj Purra]

My pleasure.

[Riya]

wow...really nice...and keep going on writing like this

[Nwang]

Thank you @Riya

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very beautifully constructed. Loved it :)

[Nwang]

Thank you Ms.Awesome ;)

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)

[The Nude Writer]

Awwwe. Such a sweet poem :)

[Nwang]

Thank you. Much appreciated.