Belly of the Beast

12 word horror story contest! What do you think?

Her feet disappeared into its gullet.
It looked at me.
"Still hungry."

Author's Note

I'm trying my hand both at horror and my first contest! My good writing friend Lavorther is also joining this contest, so please check out his page, too! If you're willing of course!

Reviews

[Lavorther]

Amazing how many people can do with just 12 words. I got a full picture in my mind, which is hard to do with three sentences. Also, thank you for mentioning me ^.^

I barely dare correct your spelling because you are much better at that than i am, but i have a feeling "it`s" needs to be "its". I might be wrong though.

[Briana]

Oh my lord my phone autocorrected my word! Thank you for pointing that out but unfortunately I've already submitted like an idiot. Oh well, if I don't make rank for that it's simply not to be. Thank you for the kind words!

[Dhanadeepa Dixit]

Very good form with this, each line being shorter than the last makes for a nice conclusion. And the final quotation marks are aptly placed. Very well done and spooky story!

[Briana]

Thank you so much! I hoped someone might catch that!