We Can Make It...

We Can Make It...

A Poem by Novicepoet14
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Basically...my mum has always been there for me no matter what...and now the tables are turned and I need to support her.

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I don't know how to thank you
For everything you've done
You really are amazing
You are my number one

The times you helped me out
And told me...it will be ok
Well now it's my turn to support you
We'll get through it day by day

So please do not feel guilty
I honestly don't mind
It's all I can do to help you out
Since you've always been so kind

I know that times are tough
But we will make it in the end
As long as we stick together
You're my mum and my best friend.


© 2015 Novicepoet14


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This is so touching and beautiful!
You are a great daughter :)
Your mum is as lucky to have you as you are to have her.
Such a moving, emotional, touching and deep piece.
Also a strong piece in a way.
I loved it.
The rhyming was great to.
Keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Novicepoet14

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts...it's nice to hear opinions from people who I do not know :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Well I am cimmy, nice to meet you :P
You are welcome :)
This is terrific! Always take care of mom!Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Novicepoet14

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts much appreciated as always :)

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Added on March 3, 2015
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Novicepoet14
Novicepoet14

chichester, West Sussex, United Kingdom



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Hi my name is Laura, I'm now 28 years old and I love poetry. i was on this site 4 years ago where i first shared my poetry for the first time. a lot has happened between now and then but i feel its no.. more..

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