Senses

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SENSES

*inspired by 5 senses* by 50cent

 

Exploring skin, tasting flesh

Barely touching just lingering

Above my senses

All my senses

Intoxication from love

in a fog of ecstasy

swimming in desire

above my senses

all my senses

Lips traveling slowly

Up and down the spine

Intoxicating heat

Need desire yearning

Above my senses

All my senses

Passions dance acted out

Heart to heart

Souls dancing in time

To the erotic beat of desire

In unison, perfect harmony

Yours and mine

Above my senses

All my senses

Breathe me in

Let it control your senses

Feel me want me

Float

Above my senses

All my senses

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Kiddo, your writing is suburb. I love reading all you have. You are my inspiration ...it shows how much you put into your writing..everything as you do in life...Brilliant just brilliant. I can feel the swaying, the desires, and drink up all the rest in between over and above. The senses are there for something and look out girl because you used em all...in the most captivating and sensual way ..love it!!

[WindSong]

Astounding! I'm breathless by the beauty of this poem. It is written from the depth of your soul.

WindSong

[DONALD EISSLER]

WOW !!! THAT WAS GRRRRRREAT THIS HAS INSPRIED ME TO WRITE SOMETHING ON THE SENSOUS SIDE THANK YOU MS NOV GOLD PS LOVE THAT NAME

[Yina]

Wow That was beautiful:) I love the way you wrote this:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like how you use the senses in the poem. The description was strong and I like the feel and the emotion of the poem.
"Heart to heart
Souls dancing in time
To the erotic beat of desire
In unison, perfect harmony"
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[MS. BABy]

this flows like the lips of a lover infused with desire and passion...all over the being all at once...delicious

[Aristede Craig Jr]

very nicely done very fun to read

[OT]

I like the repetition of above my senses all my senses - a strong write exploring the senses - teh beat of desire - harmonies - touch - nice!

[Inyourshadow]

Heart to heart
Souls dancing in time

This is a romantic image and my favourite lines from the poem. You use the senses with a gentle beauty showing openly your feelings, this I applaud. Very nicely penned my friend, keep em' coming

[November Gold]

The song by "50" is with Jeremiah (I think it is) I didn't know how to attach the song, because TRUST me, I am not a 50 Cent fan, but this is so different!