Simply beautiful~

* inspired by Al Green's, Simply Beautiful song*

 

 

The warm brown of your skin

Under my fingertips

Is art in motion;

Sensual, erotic art

There is nothing else

Only you and I

In motion

Sweet, seductive steps

In a lover’s dance we move

Slow and sensual

Eyes locked; speaking

No words said

A look that dares me to hesitate

Heat rising, caresses

Longing and desire

Whispers of passion

Promises of love

Your body and mine

Intertwined and interwoven

I don’t know where you begin

And I end…

And it’s all just simply beautiful

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

In a lover’s dance we move
Slow and sensual
Eyes locked; speaking
No words said

so much more is said without the use of words, a touch a look a kiss all hold their own messages and their own secrets. This is a really romantic and almost sensual poem I especially love the ending. keep em' coming

[Lily Mae]

Passion at it's best.. I love it..x

[OT]

ooo what wonderful word crafting here - very artistic word choice and placement - the flow is so poetic throughout the enjambment works well here - I like the word plays too "your body and mine intertwined and interwoven" - nice!

[TJ]

Is it hot in here or is it just me? Lol
Very good, sensual piece. You painted a portrait of love with your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are beautiful and strong. The amazing description made the emotion and desire come alive. No weakness in this outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Richielee]

woot woot! fantabulous!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

it is beautiful indeed...
your letter now a poem
maybe a song tomorrow

[Becky C Strukamp]

The vision that led you to write such sensual and scintilating words worked well. This would arose the yearning in anyone that reads it. It certainly did me. Now, look what you've done. LOL

A luscious beautfil seduction. Brialliant writing!

[MS. BABy]

The Photo was like wow, and the blending of the shades....wonderful, we are beautifully made and created HUMAN BEINGS>>>>

[November Gold]

this one was different for me. I just closed my eyes and listened to the song and typed what I was seeing in my minds eye and this is what came out

[Ruth]

Such connection..the beginning to the end..used perfectly! xx