Simply beautiful~

* inspired by Al Green's, Simply Beautiful song*

 

 

The warm brown of your skin

Under my fingertips

Is art in motion;

Sensual, erotic art

There is nothing else

Only you and I

In motion

Sweet, seductive steps

In a lover’s dance we move

Slow and sensual

Eyes locked; speaking

No words said

A look that dares me to hesitate

Heat rising, caresses

Longing and desire

Whispers of passion

Promises of love

Your body and mine

Intertwined and interwoven

I don’t know where you begin

And I end…

And it’s all just simply beautiful

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

In a lover’s dance we move
Slow and sensual
Eyes locked; speaking
No words said

so much more is said without the use of words, a touch a look a kiss all hold their own messages and their own secrets. This is a really romantic and almost sensual poem I especially love the ending. keep em' coming

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This is so wonderful and beuatiful
Very nicely written.

[Kay]

I read this everyday. It is so inspiring on so many different levels!

[Kay]

I want to paint this!!!!!!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Congrats kiddo on this being selected. It is beautifully written poem ...so full of love and desire. Love It!!

[Yina]

Wow that was really truly beautiful! I love your wording:)

[Legacy]

November Gold,

Hello, *applause* beautiful write, seems you have locked the feeling of a loving encounter, with precision.

I have a great respect for those who can place these pleasurable moments so discretely! A plus!

Have you thought about placing this one in the Love contest on Poetic Infusion Society? It is beautiful... so if you haven't please do.

Have a great day,

Legacy

[Sebastian Catfi$h]

likes this one Vember....

[xSummer'sPatient]

You can feel the passion radiating from this poem. Perfect choice of vocab and very expressive. Well done!