Her

Sent by a friend and I want to post this so that he can see how gifted he really is....

 It's Her

The feeling of soft lips to kiss, it's her
The state or tranquility she puts me in, it's her

The glow n your eyes when u look at me, it's her
The scent of u when lying next 2me, it's her

The durability u give me 2go on, it's her
Even being goofy when we're singing a song, it's her

When your dolled up, or jeans & a tee, it's her
Whether 1,000miles or right across the room, it's her

The lightheaded feeling I get around u, it's her
Keep me beamin & never feelin blu, it's her

Always backing me up; never letting me fall, it's her
Through the ups & downs; we go through it all, it's her

One of my best friends; I can depend on, it's her
You've been there with me til the end, it's her

The Reason I Wrote These Verses
         It's Her

by raymond

Author's Note

This was written by one of my best friends and I keep telling him to post stuff and let others read it. Fear can be powerful, so Im hoping that with all of the talented people here, we can give him some feedback and get his on writerscafe writing! :)

Reviews

[Enigma]

Tell your friend Raymond that he's a fantastic poet and he really should be posting is work here for all of us to read. What is he so afraid of, anyway/
This was adorable and a heart-melting poem, with warm mushy feelings coming out from every word. I loved it! :)

[WynterPhoenix]

This is a beautiful write.

[Ruth]

And so they should! Brilliant work..some people just need a gentle, friendly push lol
Stunning!
xx

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Way to go Raymond!!!

[Tasha]

this was beautiful, she is one lucky woman to have that kind of love. i hope Raymond starts sharing his work because he is really talented. we should start a group to get him to share his work.

[Lily Mae]

I love the way it's all about her.. the true love and devotion that is shared. In every little moment of every day it's her.. She is one lucky woman to have that kind of love in her life..xx Great write and I hope Raymond does start to share..x

[November Gold]

And as I have said since i read this the first time, it's beautiful and touching...and speaks of an inspiration from one soul to another