Her

Sent by a friend and I want to post this so that he can see how gifted he really is....

 It's Her

The feeling of soft lips to kiss, it's her
The state or tranquility she puts me in, it's her

The glow n your eyes when u look at me, it's her
The scent of u when lying next 2me, it's her

The durability u give me 2go on, it's her
Even being goofy when we're singing a song, it's her

When your dolled up, or jeans & a tee, it's her
Whether 1,000miles or right across the room, it's her

The lightheaded feeling I get around u, it's her
Keep me beamin & never feelin blu, it's her

Always backing me up; never letting me fall, it's her
Through the ups & downs; we go through it all, it's her

One of my best friends; I can depend on, it's her
You've been there with me til the end, it's her

The Reason I Wrote These Verses
         It's Her

by raymond

Author's Note

This was written by one of my best friends and I keep telling him to post stuff and let others read it. Fear can be powerful, so Im hoping that with all of the talented people here, we can give him some feedback and get his on writerscafe writing! :)

Reviews

[Enigma]

Tell your friend Raymond that he's a fantastic poet and he really should be posting is work here for all of us to read. What is he so afraid of, anyway/
This was adorable and a heart-melting poem, with warm mushy feelings coming out from every word. I loved it! :)

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

Wow, your friend needs to make himself a writerscafe. *snapsnapsnap* wonderful job!

[Aristede Craig Jr]

very beautifully done i snap to it clap to it love it

[Coyote Poetry]

He wrote a beautiful and positive poem of love. A wise person know when the love is real and it is good. I like the desire and the emotion of this outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Sebastian Catfi$h]

i wanna thank November Gold for the push, now im on here Sebastian Catfi$h i just wrote 2 more poems appreciation & criticism will only make me improve, im grateful for all the positive feedback on this one................

[MS. BABy]

I have been enjoying ur work tonight.......thanks

[Helpless]

great poem!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Yes your friend should post more...its well stated!!

[Wejustare]

This is incredibly sweet! Raymond, you should definitely post some more of your work!

[Elijah Gleaves]

Really liked the repetition. whoever "her" is she has to be someone special

[lostboy]

seems love like people ..is the same at all locations.