Red, Black and blue

Dont ask! i was in a weird mood writing this!

Red, black and blue my favourite colours on you,

and the blood stained dress makes you look best.

When i hit the piano keys that make you shudder

and i wont let you scream.

Not while we have guests,

who'd also love to see you look your best,

 in your blood stained black and blue faced dress.

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Lol!!!

[my sweet lonliness]

short and sweet. good

[WordsAndVoices]

short, but it is very powerful with it's imagery. I love how we have to imagine what is going on, as you gave us so little information. A brilliant write.

[china]

Short, simple and sweet. I love it. Good job

[Theo]

Short and yet really powerful with it's disturbing imagery. There is a big back story here and I like how little we actually get to see of it. The rhyming scheme is really good because of how understated it is. The inter-line rhyming is particularly good in my opinion. This is a great poem.

[chillz]

short and simple good job^^i enjoyed reading it :)

[jinjahman]

this is very intriguing. I love the piano keys image

[Nadi]

I remember this one and I still think it fantastic kai!!