Lazy Love

Lazy Love

A Poem by NotYourChinaDoll
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This isn't meant to be taken too seriously. I wrote it about a guy friend of mine who may or may not ever get married.

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A hand to hold
A girl to kiss
A moment away from your loneliness

Someone in a dress 
no matter who
You just need a yes
just need an "I do"

You've a litmus test
You won't vary by far
She must be perfect
but accept who you are

Too good for chasing
She must come to you
No need to "romance"
If her love is true

Like man waiting for duck
To fly in his mouth
Your plan will fail
Without effort yourself

© 2011 NotYourChinaDoll


Author's Note

NotYourChinaDoll
I'm open to suggestions. This one was just for fun.

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This is great. It's most certainly true. I think a middle ground is helpful, a certain level of passiveness - because chasing too hard gives false hopes and relationships that shouldn't be.

Nice write, thanks :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


like this a lot...it captured indifference and wanting in the same breath

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 6, 2011
Last Updated on November 11, 2011
Tags: Lazy, Love, men, guys, boys, guy, boy, man, romance, marriage

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NotYourChinaDoll
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I only write occasionally when inspiration hits. Most my poems are downers because I find that, unfortunately, the sad emotions and experiences are easier to find the words for (as I show in "Elusive .. more..

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A Poem by NotYourChinaDoll