China Doll

China Doll

A Poem by NotYourChinaDoll
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I'm not your china doll

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 You think I am a china doll
With a fragile flawless face.
The doll that must be kept up high
Inside a small glass case.

You think I am so innocent 
So breakable and naive
You think this is a compliment
That's what you believe

You think I'm something perfect
Something to collect
Too good for this harsh world
For "my sake" you must protect

You place me on this pedestal
To look at, not to touch
Your angel girl with gentle smile
And cheeks with perfect blush

I'll tell you once it's just not true
These things you think you know
I'm wiser than that girl you see
I'm stronger than I show

One wrong move won't shatter me
I don't need your protection
And though I may be good,
I am far from perfection

Erase that china doll's image 
Then look at me and blink
Then listen close, I won't repeat
I'm not the girl you think

© 2010 NotYourChinaDoll


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This is brilliant. Your writing is fantastic, the descriptions paint a perfect picture and the emotive words grip the reader. The way you twisted together the two themes... marvelous! I've never thought of that, but it is a perfect idea! Unique and and colorful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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The flow is perfect the poem is great,
so what else is there to say?

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this is really good. i can relate. it's so well written and flows really perfectly.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Just wow. Need I say more?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I love this poem. Very beautiful written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'I'm not the girl you think'

Is a brilliant line after all the beautiful descriptions on what "I" think.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very great piece indeed here (: You should be very proud of this =D Good write, well done (:
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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're breakable because this is a hit.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree wit Free As The Wind! This is a brilliant piece! great imagery, great flow:) Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write beautify written I like it nice job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Except for a line or two, the flow seemed quite flawless. There is a pervading sense of strength etched into every line, which draws out an image of a strong woman in my mind. Bravo!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 18, 2009
Last Updated on February 25, 2010
Tags: china doll, porcelain, image, wrong, Pedestal, You think, china, doll

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NotYourChinaDoll
NotYourChinaDoll

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I only write occasionally when inspiration hits. Most my poems are downers because I find that, unfortunately, the sad emotions and experiences are easier to find the words for (as I show in "Elusive .. more..

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